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Jan 14, 2022
9:44:09pm
mottman All-American
It has some good ideas. The main issue is that it's resolved in like 5 minutes.
Spoiler It needed a little bit more time for the tension of the granddaughter to breathe. Let her figure something out to help save the house and town. The rest of the family needed to have time to act miss Mirabel and learn what it's like not to have a power. There's some good themes about the pressure of living up to everyone else's expectations (see the song by Louisa) but they are undeveloped. As it stands the problems are resolved with a hug and a song.
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