No offense, but that has to be one of the lamest attempts at a reverse I've seen.
Where's the intrigue? Where's the humor (intentional, I mean)? Where's the twist? This is just a basic attempt at a barely disguised parallel, with details that are frankly too difficult to swallow.
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