May 14, 2024
8:06:25pm
Greg Kite's 'stache All-American
It really reads like you are calling out carbonated water as something that is not good for you

Your intent may have been to say, "the combination of all these ingredients in a diet soda are not good for you", but what it reads like is that you are specifically calling out each individual ingredient as individually not good.

And yes, it would have been much clearer if you would have said something along the lines of "ingredients in diet soda like X, Y, and Z are not good for you while leaving out something as benign as carbonated water from the list.

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Originally posted on May 14, 2024 at 8:06:25pm
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